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Post by LilPippin on Jan 7, 2005 3:18:32 GMT 1
Hey everyone. This is my poetry thread. I will occasionally post my poems (both LotR and non-LotR) here. This will be where I hope to get constructive criticism before I post on other sites. Please feel free to express your thoughts on my poetry(without flames please. They WILL be sent back to you!)lol. Enjoy!
Note all poems are copyrighted by LilPip Publishing Corps. (*grins*) SO NO STEALING!
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Post by LilPippin on Jan 7, 2005 3:30:58 GMT 1
DRIVEN
by: LilPip
The chill
of the Dead
bursts through his
soul.
They whisper
for him to
turn back.
Their screams,
their pain, their
suffering
scar and blacken
his graceful
Elven soul.
His loyalty to
his life-long friend,
drives him to stand
and fight.
He wants not
to enter the
Paths of the Dead,
but he does so to protect
his friend,
the Heir of Isildur,
the Son of Arathorn,
the Hope of Men,
his own Estel.
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Post by Aranel18 on Jan 19, 2005 16:53:58 GMT 1
Lilpip that was really good...  you ARE a really good writer:D...... |
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Post by LilPippin on Jan 25, 2005 0:49:59 GMT 1
Thanks Aranel!
What People Say
People say that friendships
have their ups and downs.
Like a roller coaster,
they fly down
and work back up again.
But what if the roller coaster breaks down
and everyone goes downhill?
Would you remain below,
with only your memories
and tears?
Would you kick the ride
for its failure?
Or would you walk back up
the track
with your friend
holding their hand forever?
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Post by LilPippin on Feb 7, 2005 0:36:45 GMT 1
Journeys
LilPip
The lone figure
stands upon the bow,
arms held aloft,
breathing
the smell of the sea.
A pale moon
rocks on the horizon,
guiding lost souls.
The lone figure
reveals himself
to the light
suspended
in endless darkness.
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Post by LilPippin on Feb 9, 2005 3:41:43 GMT 1
Untitled(so far)
With your fangs bar'red, I have been forced to cower.
It has been many passings of sun to moon
Since I had felt that I had room.
And
If though shall ever see my heart engulfed in flames,
Thou willst know that I've been overcome by pains
inflicted by those that I'd once loved.
-LilPippin(COPYRIGHT!!!!!)
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Post by Ven on Feb 9, 2005 11:54:12 GMT 1
*wonders why she had to copyright them* Those were wonderful!!! Though, with all of the symbols in the second one, I'll probably take another, oh say, 3 days to get Great job!! |
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Post by LilPippin on Feb 9, 2005 21:11:46 GMT 1
A poem for Ven on her birthday
Pippin wandered among
the fields and trees
And as he walked
he fell upon his knees.
A pretty lady stood there
and took his breath away,
But he didn’t know
that today was her special day.
Ven was the maiden’s name,
Pip hoped she felt the same.
Because when he learned that
today was not a day to miss
He leaned over and gave her
a great big Pippin-y kiss.
*bows* Happy Birthday Ven!
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Post by Ven on Feb 9, 2005 21:15:50 GMT 1
OMG!! That's soooo cute!!! *rofl* Thank you for writing that, well, semi-true poem!! lol  |
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Post by LilPippin on Feb 9, 2005 21:22:12 GMT 1
you have no imagination Ven... it is not semi true... its *completely* true ;D
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Post by Ven on Feb 9, 2005 21:23:24 GMT 1
;D ;D  ;D ;D YES!!! ;D Your right!! *rofl* |
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Post by LilPippin on Feb 9, 2005 22:13:50 GMT 1
havent you learned NE thing! I am *always* right!
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Post by duby<3 on Feb 15, 2005 20:13:14 GMT 1
lol, your songs are really good  Nice work  |
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Post by LilPippin on Mar 1, 2005 2:07:54 GMT 1
Thanks duby!
Heres another one:
Angsty... my first narrative LotR poem.
Elrond's Estel
I pushed the elves out of the way,
And knew the reason for your delay.
I quickly carried you inside,
Noticing that you had cried.
Your skin was deathly pale,
and your body so very frail.
Seeing you pathetically faint,
I found the poison taint.
You gave me a frightful scare,
When I realized you didn’t care.
“Blessed is your life.
Don’t give in to mortal strife.”<br>
What happened to make you sick?
Everything happened too quick.
Your brothers and I are by your side.
At our hearts you will reside.
So close you are to my heart.
Our love will never part.
But I still need you here with me,
Before I leave for eternity.
In your dreams you cried out in fear.
In an instant I was near-
to rid you of your frights-
And help you with your fights.
Keep fighting, for it isn’t your turn.
There is so much more to learn.
Just take my hand and hold it tight.
Everything is gonna’ be alright.
Please don’t leave to Mandos’ world.
In my arms, stay curled.
Lay your head upon my chest
I will help you to past this test.
In the night I call out your name.
I Bow my head in shame.
Why haven’t you healed?
Is your fate really sealed?
I forced my legs to your room,
Where all had turned to gloom.
I looked and saw no life,
and felt pierced by a knife.
I stood in terror at the sight-
of my son who’d lost the fight
You looked peaceful and calm
As I sang and stroked your palm.
Crying, I felt your chest rise and fall
as if you heard my desperate call.
We looked into each other’s eyes-
And felt the bond from family ties.
I saw a tear fall from your cheek.
And I felt my eyes begin to leak.
For many hours we were there
crying together as a pair.
I am very glad you’re healed, my son.
I am so very glad that you won.
I dread the day that we lose our Hope,
But until then, we will cope.
-Elrond's Estel
lilpippin
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Post by Rev on Mar 29, 2005 3:26:05 GMT 1
Oh that was good lilpip!! *wipes eyes*  How sad!! But..has a happy ending so...its all good I suppose. That was a very good poem! |
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you ARE a really good writer:D......
